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Sometimes

The weight

Of heavy stories that aren't mine

Makes me fall in the street

And I can't stand up for a while.






                He was a stranger.

                He just happened to cross my path

                When I was down

                Yet he came to me when I called him




« Would you please listen to one of these stories ? »

I asked


One would have been enough
Enough for me to get up
Knowing that someone else knew that story
Would have made it a little easier to carry



                « I don't care about that one story of yours. »

                He said

                « I want to know all of them. »




A lone tear rolled

                He didn't see it


                He listened.
And it's so strange
When strangers
Are friendlier
Than our "friends".
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Jetelinka Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Yes, this is perfect.
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Silver786 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much :huggle:
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Jetelinka Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
You are welcome :-)
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SatraThai Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ça me fait penser à mon passé, par contre.. Je suis sûr que tout le monde a vécu la même situation dans sa vie. Les histoires ont un poids, même si elles sont vraies, ou fausses)
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Silver786 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Writer
En effet, je pense qu'il n'y aurait pas beaucoup de monde pour prétendre le contraire ^^

Dans le cas de ce poème, disons qu'il y avait pas mal d'histoires que les gens n'aiment pas écouter, parce qu'elles leur rappellent que tout n'est pas rose dans ce monde bien que certains semblent tenter de faire comme si c'était le cas x)

Merci pour ton commentaire en tout cas ! :huggle:
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SatraThai Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oui, c'est vrai, malheureusement .. Mais, j'adore cette idée de toute façon!)))
De rien!:hug:
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Eryshta Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's really beautiful, very profound and true. Short and nice, like I love poetry. Great.
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Silver786 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Writer
It's a pleasure and an honour to hear that dear, thanks a lot ! :tighthug: I'm really glad you like it ^^
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Scarecrowlover Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I could write for hours on why I thin that's so on a philosophical level. But I rather not make a fool on myself so all I'll say for now is: Truly wonderful...
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Silver786 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Writer
I'm absolutely sure that you won't, your comments are always amazing dear :tighthug:

Thank you very much for the compliment ! :happycry:
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